Thursday, 26 July 2012
I LOVED HER BUT SHE LOVED ANOTHER
This is a tribute to a story by one of the beautiful ladies gracing here. She had written this fantastic story which had ‘ gripped’ my heart in ways I couldn’t imagine.
The title : I loved her…she loved another!
truly captures the essence of some relationships out there.
It is a sad story, but a beautiful one all the same.
So, I thought I would spin it out in a different way. A poetic way. I hope I did justice….
Be the judge.
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May 23, 2012 4.15 p.m
A shrill scream rents the midnight air
Heavy with the depth of painweighed down in heavy sorrow
The cry of a dying heart in utter despair
Caused by a loss it fails to swallow.
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If only time could be borrowed
Just so words uttered foolishly could be recanted
If only I could make up for allthe wrong bends followed
Go on a journey to reclaim that word which gnarled at the heart and left it so disjointed.
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If only I listened to the cries of the night birds
Singing of a love which already had gone sour
If only I had seen clearly the silent pledge
Telling me she indeed loved another.
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This love triangle shouldn’t have happened
If I had seen that which in the distant eyes sparkled;
Clearly I love her, but she loves another.
5.43 p.m
Merci! AUTHORS NOTE..What do you know? I am what others will call me. But I answer only to what I callmyself. You want to find out more? Maybe, we need to find out together...there are ways if u catch my drift. Hit me/ 08098181829 2796f571
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